Thursday, February 26, 2009

The Price of Going to Class

Imagine your daily routine. Wake up, eat breakfast, take the train, get to school, complain about work, go to lunch, play lacrosse, go home, eat dinner, do homework, and go to sleep. We often complain about how horrible our lives are until we consider the lives of others. Specifically, we read an article about girls in Afghanistan who were told not to come back to school, but returned anyways because of their desire to learn. 11 girls and 4 teachers were attacked by 10 Taliban militants who were employed to throw acid on the faces of these courageous women. Can you imagine going to school and being brutally attacked? These men, The Taliban, are afraid of young women learning to read and write. Shamsia Husseini said, being brutally attacked by the Taliban and receiving many scars, "The people who did this to me don't want women to be educated. They want us to be stupid things." I don't understand how anyone could be so brutal and vile. The Taliban are some of the most powerful men in Afghanistan and they are afraid of young women. What would our society be like without women and allowing them to get an education? Education has come a long way in the U.S. but it also faced hardships along the way. Including mandatory public education, integration of women in education, and finally the integration of blacks and whites in school during the Civil Rights Movement. I believe that the Afghanistan government needs to rid the Taliban from their beautiful country. They are corrupting the education for women and bringing violence to the country side. This situation reminds me a lot of the one in Germany in the early 1930's. After Hitler was appointed chancellor of Germany, the Nazi party was now the official party of Germany. History teachers often ask, "Why even study history?" And one of the main responses is that we need to learn from our past mistakes. And I believe that this point relates to the current situation in Afghanistan and even Darfur. In the past there have been brutal homicides such as the Holocaust and the Armenian Genocide. Other governments should step in and rid the Taliban once and for all. During the Holocaust the U.S. knew what was going on in Germany and didn't step in while millions of Jews were being slaughtered. When they finally decided to join in the war effort it was too late; the damage had already been done. Now it may only be schoolgirls and teachers, however the Taliban could spread and there presence could affect the entire world.

6 comments:

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  2. I thought it was very clear and consise, with the opinion stated clearly. BTW: afghanistan's government right now is not strong enough to get rid of the taliban

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  3. I agree that the opinion was stated very powerfully, and with some nice rhetorical questions to get the reader thinking.

    Thing is, you mention a few specific pieces of evidence (Germany, etc.), but you don't follow them up very strongly with analysis.

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  4. I like how you link the crisis in Afghanistan with American history. I think that it makes it a little bit easier to relate to and shows how far behind Afghanistan is in terms of the culture and government. They now have to overcome what we did years ago. Also, you present a future problem that could arise because of this issue, saying that while girls are the only ones being oppressed now, it could grow later. Thats really effective because it intensifies the problem and makes people want to act to prevent an even bigger issue.

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  5. Ryan,
    Even though you destroyed my post, I really liked yours and I love how you try to put the reader in the shoes of the Afghan girls. Learning from our past mistakes is a very good addition and I like how you bring in the situation in Darfur, for it relates very well. The quotes you use are very effective evidence for your point, and make your view seem much clearer. Well done Ry

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  6. I love the illusions, it really pulled me into the story! I also like how you are very opinionated and passionate about this topic, it really makes your writing a lot better.

    ps, the Tabliban are a terrorist group, not part of the Afghanistan government. They ARE trying to rid the Taliban from there country, they just aren't strong enough currently

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